Don't look here unless you need to >//<

I'm okay with you guys giving me constructive critisizm.
And I already know I sound really bad.
https://soundcloud.com/qtpie430/crossing-field-2
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Hmm, not bad, but there's places to improve.

1. When you sing, make sure to put emphasis on every syllable (do not smoosh syllables and sounds together or weaken them). I'm sure it's because the song you were singing was a bit hard to pronounce, but just remember to use your mouth and shape each syllable. If something (in english) ends in a t, make sure to kick the habit when singing to change it to a d or not pronounce it strongly.

2. Sing from your stomach, if that makes sense. It actually helps if you envision yourself while singing squeezing your stomach and producing sound.

3. What you sang kinda sounded out of your range (the high notes were okay but they sounded uncomfortable for you), remember you can always sing an octave down if it works better for you.

But overall, you have potential. I hate criticizing people because I'm not a professional singer nor am I awesome but I hope just my experience from chorus will benefit you >.>

Ty -nyaaaaaaaaa

The high notes probably sounded forced because I was really nervous while recording ><
I know what you mean by breathing through the stomach-- We call them chambers in band, and you should always make sure that you don't fill up your chest chamber unless your playing/singing for several phrases without another breath. It makes the sound airy and hollow.
I'm glad you think I have potential *bows graciously*

Hello there!
Well,your vocal timbre sounds like is mezzo. Maybe just like you said you are nervous and that why your high note is shaky. However,I think that you can hit the note with a fews practice...your voice will super fit kajiurago song just my opinion. Well,you can always try different type of song to find out which type of song suits you the most. Do some adjustment,sometimes no need to follow exact the pitch of original vocal. Each of our voice is unique in a way. That is all my opinion. Have a nice day

Thank you for responding *bows*
What is Kajiurago song? I looked it up on youtube, but nothing helpful came up o.o;
I'm going to try and re-record tomorrow, so I'm not as nervous.
Hopefully.
Have a nice day, too ^^ *Bows again*

Hello
It's actually pretty good! but can be improved ^^
And i agree with Alyss everyone has his/her own unique way of singing
but I'm no great singer myself but everyone can get better with training and stuff XD

Kajiurago song is like...you try search youtube on Sis Puella Magica/Ensei...kajiurago sounds like those... =w=d

Ohh~ Thanks :3